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There is no doubt that exploration is of great important to countries, because the countries can know more about different cultures by exploration.Those lovely boys and girls of this picture represent people all over the world. They wear different clothes, they have different haircut they have different skin colors. Perhaps they have different habits, different languages. However, they hand in hand, they are blissful because of meeting each other. They can influence eache other, and make progresses in their culture together.
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Exploration is important fro countries, because it is good for human to know the Earth exactly. In this picture, a big hand is holding a global, the Earth--our home. By exploration, people can find new lands, and we can know more geography, topography and history about the whole world. Everything about the Earth is very clear. Exploration is beneficial for human to control the Earth, even the universe.(just like the hand.) All in all, exploration will have a profound impact on human history.
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Exploration is important for countries, because it's helpful for human to get more fertile resources to develop. As we know, if we want to change a poor city into a super city, the first thing we should do is develop its economy. To discover new lands, get more resources, such as oil, coal, and take them to the poor city. The poor city can make resource trade to get money. And use the income to develop its environment, education, industry.
How come your essay only has three paragraphs?
ReplyDeleteWhat happened?
Where is your introduction and conclusion.
Focus 2/4
It is not finished.
Organization 2/4
Incomplete essay.
Content 2/4
It is very interesting. You explain each one carefully but it is not in an essay.
Usage 0/4
Incomplete, I cannot mark this.
Style 0/4
Incomplete, I cannot mark this.
Total mark 6/20 x2 - 12/40
Oh no! You were going to get an "A" in Canadian Studies, what happened here?